This is what you get when you combine that "one sentence from your WIPs" meme with open letters to your fics.
Dear "These Graces That Hold Me":
Please stop being so difficult to write. Also, please stop throwing Fang's verbal mannerisms into my everyday speech, thanks."There has to be a way," she says while the very beginnings of a plan spool together in her head, tightening tiny knots in the loose, unravelled mass of threads that her mind has become.
Dear "Gifts and Treasures":
Something needs to happen
, damn you!For all that this crumbling castle was brand new, was potentially lethal territory, following Yuffie was exquisitely familiar.
Dear "First My Left Foot":
An actual plot--or at least a few more specifics on the conflicts--would be nice. So would a first line.For an instant Lightning entertained that idea that if she'd known this was what Fang and Vanille had meant by, "Wake up," she'd have stayed asleep.
Dear "Hollow Hearts":
Please, please, for the love of the Watergod, PLEASE decide whether you're an angsty examination of moving on/nightmares, or whether you're a moody (but snappily witty) exploration of nightmares, growing up, and friendhsips that become something up.Vincent's 'do something about this' expression turned sour like vinegar, morphed from mild disapproval into full-blown 'You are a bad influence on children, I KNEW it.'
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